Less is more, More or less..
Posted by Neil Brimelow | Filed under Uncategorized
Still debating on whether or not to toss out what I have written so far and take the mysterious angle to the opening. Also, to have the scenes as montage up to the “temple” entrance. My fear is that I am too “wordy” in my action descriptions. Most scripts today, even ones that are action heavy, have more dialogue. Oh, there will be a lot more dialogue later, but I don’t want to put off a prospective reader by big blocks of action text.
Well, I am up to page five now (Well, starting on page five) and counting.
I hope to have up to page fifteen (the end of the prologue) done by this weekend.
